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Last October, Clubhouse challenged you to
finish this exciting story about discovering God's armor.
Nearly 500 entries from every continent but Antarctica
came into our office. Read on to discover the top picks
in Clubhouse's all-time largest writing contest!
You finished the story by Tracy Lesch!
The five friends held hands and knelt around the
warrior.
Kate began praying: “Heavenly Father, we're not sure
what we're doing, but You know everything. Hear our
prayer of need. Please show us what You want us to
see.”
When the five opened their eyes, the warrior was
adorned with gem-laden armor: a helmet, a round
shield, a metal breastplate, a thick leather belt and
sandals. A silver sword filled the statue's right hand.
“There are six pieces. We only hold and keep five.”
Katie said.
“I'll take the shoes of peace,” Sharon said. “I don't like to
fight.”
Just then, they heard a voice over a megaphone near
the cave entrance.
“Come out, whoever you are. We will shoot if you do not
comply.”
1st Place—Skilled Swordsmen
“Oh no,” Chloe moaned, “how do we get out of—”
“Hey, guys, quick,” Zach's voice rang out. “I've found
something!”
It was a secret closet. All five kids crammed themselves
in the small space and strained to close the cold, stone
door. Just then they heard swift footsteps coming into
the large chamber.
“I know I heard voices,” Kingsley hissed. “If someone is
hiding, find him! I don't want anyone discovering my
precious artifacts.”
Kingsley dismissed his assistants. Finally, entering the
secret chamber, Kingsley roared, “They're here! The
artifacts I've been looking for are here!”
His assistants quickly returned and reported, “Mr.
Kingsley, we didn't find anyone.”
“Good,” Kingsley smirked, “that warning must have
scared them away. Let's get these precious items out of
here!”
“He can't do that,” Sharon whispered. “We've got to do
something.”
“I've got it,” Stewart said, bubbling with excitement.
“Remember the note said the Master Forger will await
the prayer of need!”
“Then let's pray!” Chloe interrupted. “Dear Gracious
God, we know You see everything. Please help us save
the armor and safely get out of here. In Jesus' name,
Amen.”
Opening his eyes, Zach said, “I've got a plan. We can
use the Sword-our Scripture skills.”
“Good idea, but what about Kingsley and his men?”
Chloe asked.
“We'll secure the armor in the care of the police, and
we'll tell them all about Kingsley,” Stewart reassured.
“Ready? Let's fight!” Zach rallied as he burst open the
door with a loud, echoing boom.
“Who? What? Who are you?” Kingsley said, surprised.
“We are the protectors of the armor!” Stewart shouted.
“You're joking. This is my armor!” Kingsley said. “I got
here first.”
“That's not right!” Zach said.
Stewart confidently began quoting, “ 'He who pours out
lies will not go free.' Proverbs 19:5.”
Bravely, Sharon continued, “Exodus 20:15 says, 'You
shall not steal.' ”
“Bible freaks!” Kingsley roared with anger.
Cleverly, as the friends quoted Bible verses, they
backed Kingsley and his two assistants into the secret
closet.
“ 'The LORD detests lying lips, but he delights in men
who are truthful.' Proverbs 12:22,” Katie added.
“Enough with the Bible gushing!” Kingsley screamed.
“That should do it,” Chloe said.
“Wh-what's going on?” Kingsley quivered.
Wham! The stone door mysteriously shut tight
with a thud.
“Let us out of here!” yelled Kingsley's assistants.
“God's Sword really works!” Chloe exclaimed. “Let's get
the armor and get out of here.”
Later that day, as the friends were leaving the police
station, the man who pushed the note in Katie's hand
appeared. Smiling with kind eyes, he introduced
himself, “Hello, I'm James Archer.”
The friends told the man all that had happened.
“You have fought the good fight today,” James said
when he'd heard their story. “The Bible says in 2
Timothy 4:7, 'I have fought the good fight, I have
finished the race, I have kept the faith.' Press on in faith,
young friends."
As the friends departed, Katie said, “That was quite an
adventure!”
“Yes, it was,” Stewart replied, “and with God's Armor,
we'll be ready for the next one.
Jordan T., 10
2nd Place—Amazing Armor
Everyone's gasps echoed in the small room.
“What do we do?” Sharon asked.
Ten eyes looked down at the treasures they held.
Sharon had the shoes of peace; Zach had taken the
helmet of salvation; Katie held the breastplate of
righteousness; Chloe lifted the shield of faith. Stewart
loved facts, so he chose the belt of truth.
“God gave us this power,” Chloe said. “Whoever is out
there will want it, but we're supposed to be the
protectors. Prayer works, so I vote that's what we do.”
The shield she held began to glow, illuminating the
room as they knelt to ask for guidance from the Master
Forger.
It had only been a minute since he'd called out the
warning, but Damon was an impatient man. He turned
to his assistant.
“Send 'em in,” he said, nodding toward his two
gunmen.
“Ahhhh . . . Sir?” his assistant said, glancing nervously
at the cave entrance.
“Didn't you hear me?” Kingsley exploded, grabbing his
assistant by the shirt. “I said send them in!”
“But boss, look!” the man said.
Light poured out of the cave's mouth, solid and warm.
Five kids walked out, each carrying a piece of bright
metal armor. The shield was the brightest, shining like
the sun.
Sharon spoke to the two men holding guns. “Please
put away your weapons. We won't hurt you or cause
any trouble.”
The gunmen glanced at each other and then took off
running as Sharon's shoes glowed more like Chloe's
shield.
“Come back, fools!” Kingsley screamed.
“Please believe us, you will not need guns,” Stewart
said as his belt shone brighter. “We're only kids.”
“You're right,” Kingsley hissed. “You're just five kids
who don't know anything about the armor you're
wearing.”
Katie spoke for the first time. “Sir, we may not know a
lot about what we're doing, but we have a God who
knows everything, and He reveals His plan to us.” The
breastplate of righteousness began to glow.
All this light was getting into Kingsley, gripping him
from the inside. But then he suddenly laughed cruelly
and grabbed a gun from his jacket.
“Is this part of God's plan?” he shouted, pointing the
gun at the kids. Horror filled everyone's face as Stewart
whispered to Zach.
“We need all of God's power to save this man. It's your
turn.”
Zach took a step forward. “Sir, you can discover power
right here, right now.”
“I have power,” Kingsley growled.
“Not real power,” Zach said. “Real power comes from
God and lasts forever.”
Kingsley frowned. “It's a lie!”
“Do you want real power?” Zach asked as the helmet
started to shine. “Do you want salvation?”
Light exploded from every piece of armor. When it
faded, the armor of God was gone. All that was left was
a man asking the Master Forger for true power.
“Come on, we have something for you!” Stewart was
still speaking truth as he led Damon into the secret
room.
“The sword of the Spirit should still be here,” Katie said.
“We were supposed to share it.”
Katie was right. There was the sword, still held in place
by the statue. As Damon stepped toward it, there was a
bright flash of light. When everyone looked toward the
statue again, they saw an old book instead of a sword.
“The Word of God pierces like a sword,” Chloe
whispered.
Christian W., 13
3rd Place—True Riches
Sharon let out a small yelp. “Who is that?” she
whispered fearfully.
“I don't know,” Katie said as she clutched the
breastplate.
Suddenly, a man appeared in front of them. He was tall
and clean-shaven. Although he looked very handsome,
his cold blue eyes showed he was an evil man used to
getting his way.
Chloe gasped. “Damon Kingsley. The guy who
inherited a billion dollars. He's been on the news for
months!”
“I'm glad you recognize me,” Damon said. He smiled,
but his smile sent chills down their spines. “I would love
to believe you are innocent kids that just happened to
be at the wrong place at the wrong time. But you all
seem pretty smart. I'll bet we can make an arrangement.
You give me the armor, and I will give you $600 each.”
“Six hundred dollars!?!” Stewart sputtered. “Isn't that a
lot of money?”
Damon waved his hand. “A mere trifle. So what do you
say?”
Zach stepped forward. “We would like to talk about it,
please.”
Damon stepped back. “Very well. But hurry up. The
men outside will get suspicious and start shooting.”
They got in a huddle so Damon would not hear them.
“I don't trust him as far as I could throw him,” Katie said
bluntly.
Sharon and Chloe nodded.
“I agree,” Zach said. “He gives me the shivers.”
“Six hundred dollars is a lot of money,” Stewart said,
“but I have to agree.”
Zach stepped forward. “We would love to accept your
generous offer, Sir, but we think we should keep the
armor.”
Damon smiled his sick smile again. “Well, I guess we
are going to have to do things the hard way,” he said.
And with one quick motion, he grabbed the pistol
clipped to his belt and pointed it at them. “Be wise and
don't move.”
Suddenly, a shot rang out, and they automatically
ducked. Without thinking, Zach picked up the sword
and prayed, “Lord, I don't know what I'm supposed to
do, but I'll trust You.”
The sword started to glow, and a beam shot out of it.
The beam hit Damon in the chest. He staggered
backward and collapsed onto the rocky ground.
Katie took advantage of his fall and shouted, “Run!
Run as fast as you can!” They all ran for the entrance to
the cave.
Once they got outside, they all breathed a sigh of relief.
They walked to their hotel with the pieces of armor.
When Katie got to her room, her mom immediately
noticed the breastplate. “Where did you get that piece
of metal?”
Katie smiled and said, “Boy, do I have a story to tell
you.”
Bezi Y., 11
Honorable Mention—Mighty Warrior
“Oh, no!” Chloe shrieked. “What will we do—”
She was cut off by gunfire. Everyone fell to the floor.
Katie put the shield in the gap they had come through,
blocking the bullets. Suddenly, the shooting stopped.
“Identify yourselves, and we won't shoot!” Kingsley's
henchman shouted.
“We can't identify ourselves,” Sharon said decisively.
“We must say something or they'll shoot,” Chloe
reminded her.
The next thing they heard was a round of bullets that
caused the gap to widen in a cloud of rocks and dirt.
“The gap is too wide for the shield!” Katie cried.
“Hey,” Zach exclaimed. “I have an idea. What if one of
us goes out in full armor to talk to them? Meanwhile, the
others will try to find a way out and bring the police.”
“Good idea,” Stewart said. “I think you should wear the
armor, because you came up with the idea.”
Quickly and carefully, everyone helped Zach put on the
armor. He turned and walked slowly forward until he
was out of sight. The friends stood silently, waiting . . .
CRASH!
“What was that?” Sharon yelped.
“Come out or we'll shoot your friend!” Kingsley's
henchman roared.
“Zach could die, and it's my fault,” Katie said. “If I hadn't
convinced you to come with me, none of this would
have happened!”
“We made our own choices.” Chloe said firmly.
“Now we need a solution.” Sharon added. “We can't
help Zach by sitting here.”
“Hey, Katie” Stewart exclaimed. “Read the last line of
that poem again.”
“And the Master Forger will await the prayer of need.”
“You know, we forgot to ask God for wisdom before
Zach left.” Sharon said. All five knelt to pray.
“Dear God,” Chloe began. “We need Your help. We are
trapped in a cave surrounded by evil men who are
threatening our lives. Please give us Your protection
and wisdom. Please help us trust in You. In Jesus
name, Amen.”
A strong blast of wind blew in followed by a blinding
light. When their eyes adjusted, the stone warrior stood
in front of them in a new suit of armor.
“Stay here until I call for you.” He said in a deep voice.
He walked through the opening. His presence was so
awesome that the henchmen collapsed.
“Come out children.” The warrior's voice boomed.
They ran out of the cave and grabbed Zach, but the
warrior was gone!
Suddenly, police came from all directions.
“There you are,” came a familiar voice. The children
rushed to their youth leader.
“We're fine,” Katie said.
“I need all of you to come to the station to tell your
story,” the policeman said as they took the henchmen
away.
“That won't be the only time you will be telling your
story.” Their youth leader said sternly. The friends
looked at each other and groaned.
While at the station, the children found out that
billionaire Damon Kingsley was behind the secret plan
to steal the armor and take over the world. Because of
their intervention, his wicked plan was thwarted.
Kingsley and his men were sent to prison. As for the
armor, it was given to a prominent museum in Israel
with the poem for display. The children went home and
lived peacefully . . . until their next youth trip.
Kara L., 14
Honorable Mention—Passageway to Safety
Everyone froze, hoping that the person on the
megaphone would go away. In a few seconds, they
heard the voice again.
“OK, archeologist, bring 'em here.”
“I think I recognize that voice,” Stewart said. “I heard it
on the news last night. It's the famous billionaire,
Damon Kingsley.”
“Once again, the billionaire attacks!” Sharon joked.
“Sometimes I really think it's like that,” an unknown
voice said form behind.
All the kids jumped. They hadn't heard anyone come in.
“I'm the one who gave you the riddle in the
marketplace. I see you figured it out. We must leave
immediately. I was hoping you would be here, as I
knew I would need help to keep the armor out of
Kingsley's hands. He has a lot of helpers waiting for
me, and some of them are armed. Now where is the last
weapon?”
Katie handed him the sword of the Spirit.
“Please help me move this over,” the man said as he
began to push over the statue.
Everyone helped. Once it was moved to the side, a
passageway appeared. The five friends followed the
man into the secret tunnel.
Once they were safely into the passageway, Chloe
asked, “Who are you?”
“Ah, yes, I forgot to tell you, didn't I?” the man said. “I'm
Amos Kloner. And you?”
“I'm Chloe, and these are my friends Sharon, Zach,
Katie and Stewart.”
Amos suddenly stopped and said, “Here we are.” They
all climbed a ladder into Amos's lab. They walked to the
door, but before they opened it Amos asked, “Does
everyone have their armor on?”
“Yes,” the children answered.
“Then let's go!” Amos yelled. As they ran into the street,
he shouted, “Come, fight the billionaire!”
People run up to help them. They yelled so loud that
and scared Damon Kingsley so much that he ran away
before he even saw them.
After it was all over and they were sitting in Amos's
house, Katie said, “This reminds me of the story of
Gideon from the Bible.”
Everyone agreed.
“Do you guys want to read it?” Stewart asked.
Everyone did. They opened their Bible and started to
read the story of Gideon.
Krista B., 11
Honorable Mention—Blinded by Greed
A loud click echoed through the dark recesses of the
secret chamber as someone cocked a gun. Katie
caught her breath.
“I think they mean business,” she whispered to the
others.
They nodded and walked single file out of the now not-
so-secret cave. A half dozen of Damon Kingsley's men
stood with their guns in firing position outside the
chamber's entrance.
“Judd,” the man in charge barked. “Search them, and
tie them up.” He turned and smirked at the five kids. “So
you thought you could steal from one of the richest,
most powerful men on earth?”
“Damon Kingsley?” Stewart muttered.
The leader smirked again. “That's right, and the boss
wasn't happy when he found out that our 'friend' told
some kids about the treasure.”
“Friend?” Chloe asked.
“Yeah, bring him in.”
Another one of Kingsley's men came in prodding a
prisoner with his gun.
“The stranger who gave us the note in the market!”
Sharon blurted.
“Yes, I'm an archeologist, and my name is Professor
Mustaff. I gave you the note because you seemed to
know a lot about Christianity and prayer.”
“But now that won't do you any good!” the leader
cackled.
“You won't get away with this, Myer.” Dr. Mustaff said.
Myer ignored him and squeezed through the narrow
niche with three of his men, leaving two men to guard
the prisoners. When the two guards had moved a short
distance off, the professor whispered, “I strongly
suggest we pray.”
The five friends nodded and bowed their heads. But
they were interrupted by the sound of grunting as Myer
and his men heaved the cumbersome statue out of the
chamber. As they set the heavy statue down with a
thump, Katie closed her eyes and prayed. “Dear Lord,
don't let these men succeed. Please Lord, show us
what to do.”
Suddenly, there was a blinding flash of light. Myer and
his men jumped backward screaming and holding their
heads.
“I can't see!” Judd shouted.
“We're blind,” Myer moaned.
“This is just like the Bible story where Elisha asks God
to strike the enemy armies blind,” Professor Mustaff
said.
Stewart nodded, “Maybe we're supposed to be like
Elisha.” His friends and Professor Mustaff stared at him.
“Remember at the end of the story, Elisha prays again
and God restores their sight?”
Sharon shook her head emphatically, “What if they get
mad and shoot us as soon as they can see?”
“That's a risk we'll have to take,” Stewart said as he
began to pray. “Dear Father, I know these guys tied us
up, and that they are trying to use this treasure for evil,
but if it's Your will, please let them see again. Oh, and
please help us to get safely back to the hotel. Amen.”
Myer and his men immediately regained their sight.
They dashed out of the cave without a backward
glance.
“Well,” chuckled Professor Mustaff as he freed himself
and began working on the other's knots, “that worked
out pretty well. They were so afraid that they ran out
without even thinking about the treasure.”
“God was really with us tonight.” Sharon said.
“Let's hope He'll be with us when the rest of the youth
group finds out we're missing,” Stewart joked.
Everyone laughed as they left the cave thinking about
their adventure.
Isaiah L., 13
Honorable Mention—Savior of the World
“We know you're in there,” the voice echoed.
The five children started praying. Stewart had the
sword in his hand. He felt God's power come on him.
With a strength that wasn't his own, he lifted the sword
and stuck the cave wall. When the dust cleared, they
saw light and walked out.
They looked over at a team of 10 men with machine
guns. The men opened fire. But Chloe stepped up and
protected them with the shield of faith. The men
panicked. They knew what God's armor could do.
“Scare them with the sword,” Stewart said.
Sharon took the sword and ran with the shoes of
peace. Nine of the men escaped, but Sharon captured
one and brought him back to the others.
“I have an idea,” Katie said. “Let's put the belt of truth
on him, so we can figure out what to do next.”
When they did that, Zach asked, “Do you know what
we are supposed to do next?”
“Yes, I do,” he said. “You are supposed to go to
Golgotha, where Jesus died. I don't know why. I just
know Kingsley has men there.”
“How on earth are we going to get there?” Zach
complained.
“Calm down,” Sharon replied. “These shoes make you
run fast. Let's all hold hands.”
They took off running and arrived at Golgotha within a
few minutes. They dropped hands, not even breathing
hard.
Zach looked around and saw they were surrounded by
snipers. “Sharon, give me the sword,” he whispered. He
had on the breastplate of righteousness. He charged at
the nearest sniper. Snipers opened fire against him. But
God's armor protected him.
While Zach was chasing off the snipers, the other four
debated about what to do.
“How about we pray?” Stewart suggested. They knelt
down in prayer to their Lord.
Stewart looked at the moss on the mountain. He
brushed it away. He saw a notch that was the same
shape as his helmet. He took the helmet of salvation
and inserted it. The rock swung open.
Stewart yelled, “Everyone, get in here!” When Zach
stepped in, the door swung shut.
It was not dark. There was a hole in the ceiling of the
cave, illuminating the most beautiful thing on earth.
“The ark of the covenant!” gasped Katie.
“How did it get here?” Zach wondered aloud.
Stewart had studied this, so he knew a lot about it.
“Legend says when Babylon took over Israel, someone
moved the ark. No one knew where.”
The five friends stood in reverent silence for a few
moments.
“What are we supposed to do now?” Zach asked.
Stewart read the Greek inscription. “Put the armor of
God around the sacred ark.”
They did that. Then they grabbed the sword and lifted it
above the ark. Light came from the armor and went
through the sword. The light went through the hole into
the sky.
The mountain around them shattered to pieces. Light
streaked across the horizon. It was a cross made of
light. The clouds parted and they saw their Lord Jesus
coming to save the world.
Ben B., 13
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